Intro // Eve of Eden. // Concept One: Glitchy Garden of Eden. // Concept Two: Dreams Incarnate. // Concept Three: Heaven’s greatest Superweapon. // Concept Four: Nightmares. // Concept Five: Evolving. // Concept Six: Garden Incarnate. // Concept Seven: Ever Evolving Plague. // Concept ???: All of the above. // Key Traits // ——After Poll—— // Origins and Tales // Eve’s Origin // Something, Hokmos // The War of the Earth. // Dawn of Eden // Notable things Biography // Alk // Koith // Dorgmoth Alliance // Tuvonlo Republic // Fenagon Horde // Uio Imperium // Vokon // The Concept // E-1. // Gabriel // Edward // Michelin // Lucy // Luna // Howard // Taker Twins // Mr. Bellongi // Salazimir // Huntress // Ezekiel // William // Wilford Radio All-Seeing Forest Guardian Delkon Purity Mayor Hazliek Voice Extras Eden Dash
I have had severe brain rot for form-switching creatures that aren’t quite human. So far, we’ve had:
With this desire to make one of these struggling in my mind and always flopping face first, with at least 10 different ideas, may I present,
Eve of Eden.
How or why _, Eden, and Hivemind play a role, I do not know, I’ll work out the issues as I go. This is the third time I’ve ever written down ideas in this vein.
So to start, we have Eve. Eve’s a concept, though the Hazbin Hotel concept is the one I’m going for. With that in mind,
With Eve having no bearing on the plot beyond being mentioned twice, I shall instead assume that she was left to rot along with the Garden of Eden, and with nothing there to sustain it, things began to go horribly, horribly wrong, leading to Eve becoming the glitching mess of a lady she is now, though stabilization has happened.
If that doesn’t work,
With the fruit of knowledge, Eve was flooded with dreams, of ideas, of concepts the angels had. And her body couldn’t take it. She was changed, burned into a being of pure light, of dreams, switching and shifting between them, creating more as she did, populating the garden with joy and magic unlike anything seen.
For good measure,
For her transgressions against Heaven, and her General insignificance, while Adam was promoted to general, Eve was experimented on, turned into a beast similar to another of my concepts. A creature capable of mimicking the appearances of others, and creating Alks, much like the Hivemind, used as a last ditch effort should Heaven feel threatened enough.
Now this is just getting excessive.
Like the Dreams concept, except instead she was plagued with Nightmares, and, given she was allowed to fester, became the stuff of it. Is the reason there are nightmares in hell, her form ever changing.
Let’s throw some Watcher in there.
Another Transgression one, Eve was forced to evolve and adapt, becoming a superweapon. Weakest one.
As she was left alone, she became one with the Garden, becoming both its caretaker, and a piece of it. Changes with the seasons, as the Garden does.
Due to her instability, she became something dangerous. With the Garden sealed off, she was allowed to fester, spreading herself everywhere, and what didn’t fall under her control fell soon after, as she evolved to counter it. Her endless, uncontrollable evolution led to offshoots that fought against her, yet with her, forcing her to evolve even further. Should she ever get out, hell will be unleashed upon all of Heaven, for the mistakes they made.
Nobody could decide what should happen to her, so they did all of the above, creating a conflicted, multi-self creature, holding itself together and managing well, with the addition of a teacher or master to keep order and balance between the insanity.
Regardless of which one is used, Eve will retain a specific trait.
She’s the mother of humanity. And no matter what atrocities befell her for unintentional ignorance, nothing will take that from her. Humanity exists because of both her and Adam, and her maternal love for all who visit her remains, whether it be angels or demons. She has somewhat of a Lucifer-Charlie relationship with… everyone… in that she’s a regretfully absent mom who’s trying her best to keep up with new trends, except she’s been away for Millenium, waiting for her chance to be a [BIG SHOT].
Eve is also ageless, in that Adam is ancient, yet age never caught up. The same applies to Eve, even with the Fruit of Knowledge.
Another trait of Eve that cannot be changed is her curiosity.
Unlike Lilith who sought independence, or Adam, who was content with what he knew, Eve was imbued with childlike wonder. Adam was always annoyed by her constant “Ooh what’s that?”. It was Because of this curiosity that Eve was so easily convinced to eat the apple of knowledge. She weighed her curiosity against her obedience, and her curiosity won tenfold.
Though Glitchy Garden of Eden was chosen, all of the Above won second place. so yay. All ideas. Glitchy Garden of Eden will receive special treatment.
Eve is not the only one in Eden. Others have arrived, be it fragments who have or are gaining independence, the Alks of Eve’s creation, the Koiths, or those who gained access when Eden was broken open in twin paces, in it’s Gorokolk region during a battle between Heaven and Hell, and in the Avumna region during a battle on earth, both mirroring events in the lore of Sepbox, a heavy inspiration for Eve as a character.
After the Garden of Eden was shut out from the world, it lost all relevance, and without relevance, care for it was lost too. Without anyone holding up Eden on the outside, it began to warp and glitch. And with Eve trapped inside, she was not spared from it either. It hurt her, both the physical pain of reality breaking around her, and the emotional pain that it was all her fault, she was the one who ate the fruit of knowledge.
As Eden, or as she thought of it, reality, glitched, so too did the Fruit of knowledge, that had been digesting inside of her. And with it glitching too, it gained new properties. Properties that rapidly made themselves known, as Eden seemed to shatter into seven other pieces, like staring into a room of mirrors. Through each of these mirrors, Eve could see herself, suffering a different horrible fate. She could see across timelines.
And she quickly came to terms with that fact, watching as other hers came to terms with their new selves. But some seemed to have it far better than she did. The second and fourth, Dreams and Nightmares as she dubbed them, they seemed… almost happy. And she couldn’t bear that.
So, in a fit of rage, she attempted to shatter those mirrors, to shatter the timelines that were better off than her, throwing a glitching fruit of knowledge into them. And she succeeded. But, she also shattered her own time. Because she wasn’t the one outside, she was in a mirror all her own. In shattering the mirror, she was sucked into a black void, a place outside of time, a black, soulless lake of endless muck.
And, full of misery and rage, she allowed the muck to take her. Absorb her. But the universe had different plans. Fragments of the seven timelines fell upon the soulless lake, landing at its shores. These fragments blended and mixed together, forming a single Garden of Eden that shared all of the traits of its constituents. The lake washed upon the shores of the garden that surrounded it, and was invigorated. Eve was practically flung out of the lake. And upon those shores, afraid, hopeless, and alone, the timelines finally merged truly.
It took a long time to get used to it, the different ideals, the different goals, all clawing at her. There were no other Eves. The timeline had been broken, she was the only Eve left in the self contained world Eden had become. So, to keep her mind clear, Eve took up gardening, maintaining and growing the Garden of Eden to keep her attention elsewhere as her body stabilized, repeating the transformations her pieces went through.
began to glitch, the Garden of Eden rippling with her, yet maintained stability as her body began to burn, the ideas of the glitched fruit of knowledge creating dreams incarnate. Shadowy remnants of a forgotten timeline experimented on her, enhancing her, manipulating her ability to split herself to create Alks, making Heaven’s Greatest Superweapon, while her anger formed cold nightmares to balance the dreams. She began to evolve, her pieces evolving with each other, stabilizing as the Garden itself absorbed her and she became one with it, the Tree of Knowledge itself being infected, its fruits changing. Parts of her began to fight each other as evolution converged and split, forcing her to grow stronger and stronger. And when things finally calmed down, Eve had become something brand new.
The Garden of Eden and the woman abandoned inside it had become one and the same, something the Angels would have never seen coming. Eve of Eden was something hard to understand. She was powerful, multi-faced, and capable of so much. She was on the same level as the original Angels who created Heaven. And she used this to finally break the shell Eden had become, allowing her dreams of light, hope, and peace to escape, along with a few Alks to study what had become of the world while she was away.
With the Shell of Eden broken, Eve of Eden herself expanded her reach, growing her garden into the void that surrounded it, a void not unlike the one at its center. But she quickly learned the same lesson that a different goddess did. An area made through expansion cannot sustain itself, and without any present claim, the void, The Voidscape itself, would swallow it, like nature taking over the cities that encroached on it.
So she put her effort into creating beings to fill these areas. Just as Ultra M’s friends had their own areas, so too did Eve’s creations. And just as Ultra M and the others were one and the same, fragments of a whole, so too were Eve and her creations. Each of them a piece of her, a fragment of herself split away. Different, yet one and the same. Hers to control, though she rarely exerted it.
And just as she did, so too did these fragments begin to evolve, growing into their own full beings, extrapolating from both what they had taken from Eve of Eden, and the environments, which, as with Eve of Eden, formed with them, until the Garden of Eden had expanded far beyond its original purpose, as Eve of Eden had expanded beyond hers. These “others' ' were classified as Koiths.
These others were her most perfect creations, not flawed simply for the fact that they were not twisted mimicries of others. This perfection could not be said for some of her other creations, and especially the mimicry she had made of her former husband, Adam. Her hatred of him caused his Alk to be warped to reflect what she hated most of him.
Adam…?, or as Eve of Eden would refer to him in one of her books, Envtred, was made purely to be hated, to give Eve of Eden a way to exert her anger. Due to this, Envtred itself took on a personality similar to the persona Angel Dust puts on, uncaring. As a small bit of mercy, knowing Envtred was still a piece of Eve of Eden, she gave him a secondary form, a shadowy silhouette much like the one shown while Charlie told the backstory of Hell. When Envtred was in this form he was spared from Eve of Eden’s hatred.
Due to everything she had gone through, and her 4K photographic memory, Eve of Eden began to write. And she wrote down everything important, from her backstory, to bios of all of her pieces and herself. She realized very quickly, however, that the writings were easily mixed up and took up much space in the disorganized piles she left them in, so she created Eden’s Library, and a Librarian, Marigold, to watch over it. Marigold became one of the many others.
Throughout it all, her curiosity and maternalness remained. She waited with baited breath for what her Alks would bring her, and she missed the people of the world like a mother would their child. She watched over her fragments, the others, her Alks good and bad, like a guardian would their charge.
One day, one of the angels will remember The Garden of Eden, and Eve of Eden will finally be set free, and finally share her passions with the world. But until then, she’s fine with watching from the shadows. After all, the Lake at the center of her Garden still confounds her, despite seeping into the plants and thus her. Maybe one day she’ll understand why the Lake consumed her, and why it seeks to infest her now.
20 years before humanity began to reform, a scientist studying tissue samples from a corpse deceased under mysterious conditions, saw something he had never seen before. Some sort of compound that reacted with things in ways that hadn’t been observed. Confused and mildly concerned, the scientist shipped it off to the government, with the URGENT label. And three weeks later, the government had their results. And they were not good. It was a highly infectious compound that incubated in the body for about three weeks. And they had been handling it. Chaos ensued as the lab workers gave into their infections.
50 years before the War of the Earth, the Tuvonlo Republic was nothing more than colonies, emerging from the rubble the world was left in following The Makmosk Scare. And among these colonies was a man named Edgar Hazliek, grandpa of Mayor Hazliek. And he had a dream. He would take his colony, and build them a town.
So he did, going out into the wastes to do so. And the result was a town he named Something. Something was a good town for the time, small but cozy. And Edgar loved his town.
10 years later, the Colonies that were previously ununified would sign a treaty, and be known as The Tuvonlo republic. And with a new government came transportation. So, a Highway was built. And this Highway, this core artery between colonies, just so happened to be within a mile of Something. So people started stopping by.
Seeing the use of this, Edgar’s son, Ramon, decided to capitalize on the rest stop nature of Something. He encouraged its residents to open restaurants, gas stations, hotels, and the like. The result was that Something became a place for weary travelers to get gas, food, and sleep before continuing on their way.
As a result, Something prospered and flourished, becoming quite the pretty town. But it also began to attract its fair share of strange people. Weirdos and creeps, and quite a few oddballs started showing up, some some staying, and others leaving never to be seen again. But Something endured.
The Tuvonlo Republic, following the advice of their sister country the Dorgmoth Alliance, eventually started working on reconstructing their part of the world, building up roads, and naming sectors. The region in which Something existed would eventually be known as Hokmos during the short four years of Reconstruction, before The War of the Earth threw everything back into utter disarray.
The Fenagon of the Fozanaki below, and the Uio of the Ozanaki above hated each other. They wanted each other dead. And their war, the Zaki Yokol, is what plunged the Monozanaki, land of humans, into chaos. The Fenagon and Uio broke into the midlands to fight, ruining the world peace the Dorgmoth Alliance and Tuvonlo Republic had obtained. The resulting chaos caused mass destruction, atrocities the likes of which humans had never seen committed in the midst. Eventually however, the wars were put on hold for the three to learn to get along, but it wasn’t peace.
Peace was attempted, and significant progress was made, enough to make an equivalent to the Geneva Convention, the Zaki Dormono, banning horrible weapons like the Vokon and other atrocities committed, but radicals in each of the three pushed for war, and eventually, tensions finally broke, resulting in an all out war between the three lands. Which ultimately resulted in the dropping of the Vokon by the humans, despite it being outlawed during peace times. This, as previously mentioned, opened Eden to the three nations, ending the War of the Earth, as they all tried to adapt to the new reality they lived in.
And, in modern times, Eve got her wish. Just not in the way she was anticipating. Building wars on Earth between the Dorgmoth Alliance and Tuvonlo Republic, both human, and the Fenagon Horde, and Uio Imperion, Fenagon and Uio respectively, eventually resulted in desperate attack. A Vokon, a highly explosive super-bomb that had been banned by the Zaki Dormono was fired. Who fired it was never found out, but the result was that a hole was torn through reality, and into the Avumna region of Eden. Reality, not liking having a hole in it, forcefully fused Eden and Earth, creating what felt like a cave, allowing Eve and her creations into the world, shaking up what the creatures of Earth knew.
At the same time, war was also building between Heaven and Hell, and Heaven, also desperate, fired its own super weapon, blowing a hole in the fabric of Hell, and into the Gorokolk region of Eden. Reality patched the hole, and now Eve had access to both Earth and Hell.
Which also created a gateway between the two, albeit a ridiculously complicated and dangerous one. Seeking revenge for the damages, the overlords sent the Vees up to heaven, and they blew a similar hole between Heaven and the Core region of Eden, creating a three way gateway.
With Eden as a gateway, Earth, Heaven, and Hell were forced to adapt to Eden’s existence and the creatures it brought, all three independently studying it, for comprehension, adaptation, and manipulation. And things didn’t go as planned.
Start simple. Complicate later. Can always go back in later episodes/versions.
The first Episode. Simple character designs. Simple characters. The pilot. 21 random characters. No known association, they’re just here.
A simple guy. 5 feet tall. He wears Grey trench coat and cowboy hat with a single pale red rose on the top. Under the brim of his hat, a single gray eye is visible in the darkness. The other eye, and the rest of his face, remain hidden in shadow. Always smoking a cigar. Mysterious yet knowledgeable, aware of stuff around him, while nobody is aware of things regarding him.
Edward If there’s one thing everyone knows about Edward, it’s that he’s a nerd. He’s the guy to go to about any obscure reference, because he’ll get every last one. He is also a nerd in the traditional sense, and his four foot stature, lanky, noodle-armed build, and wide rimmed glasses make that clear. He’s got reddish skin, short brown hair, and wears a white tank top and brown pants because he can’t be bothered to put on something decent. Michelin A high ranking chef that Mayor Hazliek has on speed dial. Always willing to get his crew to cater anything as long as somebody pays for it all. Six feet tall. Entirely bald, always wears an apron, black shirt and pants, and tall toque to make it clear that he is head chef. His skin is pure black, though his hands, of which he has six, appear to be purple. He also has purple eyes, eight of them. He’s a spider. Lucy Laidback is one of the best ways to describe Lucy. Rarely in a rush, always taking her time to enjoy the little things in life. She understands things and is a much better listener than Edward. Some think of her as the wise sage of the group. It’s not that she doesn’t take things seriously, it’s that she takes things slow. “If you don’t have time to do it right, when will you have time to do it over?” Is her mentality. She’s five feet tall. She has short white hair, heterochromatic eyes, as in the left is orange and the right is blue, and she wears a blue shirt with an orange jacket and black pants. Rarely puts in effort in making herself look nice. Luna Note: Not her real name. Luna is a member of a cult that worships the moon, and all have moon-related names, like Luna, to match. Dressed in a black cloak with a pure white mask covering her face, Luna is strange. Nobody knows what she really looks like, as she has refused all attempts to get her to expose her face. She’s four feet tall. Always seen at night sitting somewhere outside, staring up at the moon. She only sleeps during the day. Howard Howard. He’s here, he exists, and he may or may not be causing chaos. Resident troublemaker that comes around the town and annoys people. He never causes property damage or anything of the sort, nor does he cause actual trouble. He’s just a nuisance and knows the mayor can’t get rid of him because he’s technically doing nothing wrong. He’s 15, 5 feet tall, wears a hoodie of a rock band, and black pants. Taker Twins Twins, one giant, bulky male, and the other a slender female. Both wear much the same outfit; a black suit with a purple undershirt, though the female twin has much longer hair, forming more of a cloak. Twin critics in the same vein as Anton Ego. Both are named Osmund, because their parents were lazy.A little game Eve likes to play with her Alks, Koiths, and all other intruders. It’s simple. Get from one end of Eden to the other, surviving all the hazards along the way. Speed is up to the player, though Eve gives higher rewards for faster completion. As it draws inspiration from Pizza Tower, Eden Dash is split into individual levels, to be completed in order. This is done to reduce the difficulty. If one wants to, however, it is possible to do the whole Eden Dash in one go, no save points. It is ALSO possible to lap it. Repeatedly. How one beats the Eden Dash is entirely up to them.